Writing is not easy.
#nope
Writing is not something that most people enjoy doing.
#theydonot
Becoming a good writer requires time, practice, and feedback.
As a district with an extremely diverse population, we’ve noticed that a problem is our ability to write. Not only is this seen in standardized testing, but also in our daily, weekly, and other writing pieces. So, we are doing what any good district does, diving right into it and seeing what we need to do to help our students become better writers.
#sweet
You’d think so, but writing is hard. And right now, kids don’t want hard. They want easy. They want answers, not “What do you think”. They want it done for them, not “could there be other word choices there”. They don’t want to write.
Today, we took a writing sample on a non-fiction piece of reading we’ve been working with for the last couple of days. We knew it wouldn’t be the best, which is fine because we thought we had until Friday. We went through the graphic organizer, talking about topic sentences, supporting details, how we get text evidence into the piece, and how to wrap up the writing. We did all this together. Then I said, “Ok, with those pieces in front of you, now it’s your turn. Create a summary with a topic sentence, supporting details, and a conclusion. The one thing I can tell you, I cannot help you.”
#uhoh
There was wailing and gnashing of teeth. There was crying. There were tantrums. Ok, not really, but there were not many happy students. For them to put their thoughts on paper or a computer screen is apparently hard work, even with an organizer that has reference to a topic sentence, supporting details, a conclusion, transition words, and sentence stems. We have our work cut out for us.
However, we also have some amazing reading/writing teachers who are coaching us through these teethnashing sessions (now I’m referring to us as teachers, not the kids). They help us to see that, yes, we are all starting in different spots in our own understanding of how writing works and the teaching of said understanding to students.
I try to get my students to write whenever I can. We blog at least once a week (https://app.seesaw.me/blog/mrjohnstonclass/) and we write about various things in class. With the type of diversity we have in class, I do this for two reasons. One, the most obvious, practice. Practice with words, sentences, spelling, formatting, and just getting words out. The second reason, give them a voice. I’ve got some students who’ve had experiences I cannot fathom. The poverty they’ve escaped coming to our country is just mindblowing. They need a place where they can celebrate who they are, where they’ve come from, and what they’ve become. It’s pretty cool to learn a little more about them each and every day, both through our daily stuff, but also through their writing.
Writing is hard.
But we’ll get there.


December 13, 2023 at 2:08 am
I have also found that when I force, er, assign my students to blog publicly, they put more of an effort into their writing because they care what their peers think.
And, yes! Writing is hard. I teach college writing, and, if it helps, my students react much the same way as yours when it’s time to write, so it never ends. That’s what we in the biz call cold comfort, I think.
December 13, 2023 at 8:38 am
So many truths about writing. My sophomores are still struggling with the same things.
December 13, 2023 at 10:04 am
Oh the resistance teachers meet when we have to teach writing. And for something that sounds easy to teach we both know it isn’t. Trying to get students to break the habit of chat speak, writing more than two sentences without whining, and having them expand their ideas are just a few of the battles. Add in trying to explain certain concepts of writing such as Voice is hard too. And from an elementary standpoint it’s even more difficult to get them to write five paragraphs in response to a test prompt.
December 14, 2023 at 6:31 am
I loved your story…love how hard you and your colleagues are working to encourage writing, because getting a non writer to write is like getting oil and water to blend. I clicked over to your blog and enjoyed reading several student posts…wasn’t sure if I should comment or not. I love that you are providing them with a way to publish their writing. And I love your passion for teaching…don’t let the red tape hold you in place. Merry Christmas! 🙂
December 14, 2023 at 1:27 pm
Hey, if you want to comment, please do! I’ll approve it, then they’ll have a mini-freakout, which is always fun. 🙂 They’ll know that Mr. J’s teachers friends are looking at their writing. It can only make them do better (I hope!!).